Monday, May 9, 2011


This is some shit I was doing for school,  a first attempt at digital comic pages.
I chose to retell the story of Pinnocchio, updated for the cybernetic age. More or less self explanatory.
Some liberties have been taken with the source material.

Not total shit for a first attempt.
Many lessons learned. In future will stick to much smaller palette.

Shoulda Woulda Coulda

Need to totally redo type. Need something friendlier, easy to read. Make overall line quality/thickness more uniform, consistent. Less fiddly detail, more consistency in terms of physical proportions, make background easier to read, more defined environments.
CUT TEXT IN HALF. too much talking. I like the dialogue but its just too much.
Also that hand in the last page looks fucked.  Maybe get rid of it.

Next time....

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